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I Will still live on. Death of Icestorm. Short

Post by Icestorm on Sat Apr 12, 2008 6:53 pm

Icestorm stalked across the woodlands, noticing something strange around him but didnt mind. The sky was clear of clouds, and the silverpelt was shining brightly as ever, maybe this is a joyous day... Than he smiled back at the motionless stars. Hurricanefang and Tornadowhisker were both wandering around, during patroll, and he was the only one doing it... which is pretty bad.
*First view form*
I walked across the undergrowth, and on the soft grass to an opening where the Riverclan border is.
Suddenly, i heard something coming up the rocks of Sunningrocks. The scent of Riverclan struck my nose, but i couldnt see them. Alright... If you wont come out...
"Oh, I think I'll steal some prey from Riverclan, and i hope they dont find out!" I yelled out loud
"Oh no you dont!" I heard a voice behind me.
Before i could turn back, a great weight landed on my back, and I felt claws meeting my throat.
"Wai-!"
It was to late... Blood was gushing out, and I lost my vision, I felt another kick on my stomach, and i plunged into the river...
"Thats what you get for trying to steal our prey!"
Than I noticed... It was Spottedbelly of Riverclan, the she-cat i fought with on our border.
I couldnt feel any pain... The river turned red... and i lost my sighting of the sky... So they are still happy..
The only sound i heard was..
"Icestorm! no!" The voice of Hurricanefang and Tornadowhisker...


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Re: I Will still live on. Death of Icestorm. Short

Post by Spottedstar on Sat Apr 12, 2008 7:54 pm

Spottedbelly was confused for a moment when Hurricanefang and Tornadowhisker reeled upon her. Spottedbelly flung them aside effortlessly due to their desperation controlling their muscles. They yowled pitifully as they slumped over to the edge and looked for Icestorm in the river. "Fools!" She spat as they sat there with stupid expressions. Spottedbelly bounded downriver over the rocks, following the steady current that carried Icestorm along it. Spottedbelly let her long legs and slender body work to her advantage as she caught up with the river's speed. She watched the red and blue cat flail in the water with a keen eye. Taking a sharp turn toward the river, she dived into the cool waves and swiftly fought the swift river. Effortlessly she made her way to the tom and grabbed his scruff. Spottedbelly tightened her jaw grip and swam awkwardly back to shore on ThunderClan's side. It was more troublesome to carry a large load for she couldn't breathe through her mouth at all. Her RiverClan heritage kept her going with ease though as they reached the rocky shore. She pushed Icestorm up the beach as his friends came running up. They yelled at him to get up as Spottedbelly backed away. Hurricanefang shook him and yowled, "Come on dude!, wake up and smell the flowers, dude!" Tornadowhisker whimpered and cried, "Who's gonna tell us where the borders are and show us cool moves?" In unison they yowled,
"We love you, man!" Spottedbelly could barely access the strangeness of the situation before Icestorm coughed and shivered. Elated yowls were the last thing Spottedbelly heard as she jumped back into the river and swam to the other side. Without a word she climbed back onto the shore and dissapeared into the trees.

KYO IS BETTER DEN YUKI!

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Re: I Will still live on. Death of Icestorm. Short

Post by Icestorm on Sat Apr 12, 2008 8:41 pm

"Come on! Give pressure to it. Get me some cobwebs!" There was only a blurr of murmering... drifting into my ears.
"Here! I got a load."
"Come on! Put on everything!"
"everything?"
"YES! to stop the bleeding!"
"Oh Starclan.."
My eyes were closed shut, I could smell the scent of herbs and berries... Drifting into my nostrals, i relaxed... feeling sick and tired, and my throat had a excruciating pain, and i was exacerbating it by breating and gasping.
"where..am .." I couldnt finish my words, the pain was too much.
I squeezed my eyes shut to to try to cope with the pain.
"Luckily, the gash wasnt too deep Icestorm, or you wouldnt have lived to see another sunrise." It was Woodstripe. The brown tom with darker stripes.
"dont talk."
I gave a slight nod and tried to breath normally.
I only gave a thought, saved by the killer. Great way....
The thought ran back into my head, and I thought no more, I drifted into a deep sleep...

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